It's not the details that matter in reporting!

When I read a very long, very maudlin, front-page Inquirer story about crime in Newark, I was left knowing very little about the exact nature of the crimes, other than the fact that there were "shootings in the schoolyard." And here's all there is about the principle suspect:

Five days after the shootings, Jose Carranza, considered the principal suspect, offered to surrender to Booker in the presence of a well-known Newark lawyer. The two came face to face at police headquarters.

"I don't think words can describe the level of emotion I feel about what these individuals have allegedly done to these families and what they have done to our community," Booker said.

Two other suspects, both 15, are being held. Their names have not been released because of their age.

Carranza pleaded not guilty at an arraignment Friday. After the arrests, Shalga Hightower said she wanted "the right justice" for her daughter, Iofemi, and the other victims.

"They took three angels away from their families," she said, "but one angel survived, so the story could get told."

There's almost nothing about the suspect, and even less about the gruesome nature of the crimes. Instead, the piece mainly goes into great detail to stress that the victims had promising lives.

Why? As details, aren't the gruesome nature of what happened to them, the fiendish nature of the principal defendant, and the callused insensitivity of the criminal justice system, at least as important?

Rarely have I seen a story so long and yet so woefully incomplete at the same time. Newark is in the New York area, and you'd think that if a report about crime there was important enough to merit treatment on the front page of the Inquirer that they'd at least supply the details.

To find them, I had to turn to the New York Daily News:

The illegal immigrant accused in the execution-style killings of three college students in Newark was freed on bail twice this year after being charged with assault and child rape, prosecutors said yesterday.

The shocking revelation came as cops arrested a third suspect in the schoolyard shootings, which have horrified homicide-weary Newark.

And as if the crime weren't already heinous enough, Fox News Channel 5 reported that two of the victims may have been sexually assaulted before being shot.

About 500 people, including Mayor Cory Booker, attended a prayer vigil last night at Mount Vernon Elementary School, where Terrance Aerial, 18; Dashon Harvey, 20, and Iofemi Hightower, 20, were forced to kneel before being shot in the head.

Aerial's sister, Natasha, 19, was shot in the face and slashed with a knife but survived. She has been helping investigators from her hospital bed.

An illegal alien accused of child rape was freed to commit torture-murder? Freed?

And that's not important?

Carranza's illegal status alone was enough to trigger a headline in the International Herald Tribune, "Murder of three at New Jersey schoolyard stokes immigration debate." The IHT notes that legislation has been sponsored to prevent this sort of thing from happening in the future:

NEWARK, New Jersey: The murder of three people at a Newark schoolyard has further stoked an already contentious immigration debate, with critics of the city's current immigration policies highlighting that one of the alleged attackers was in the U.S. illegally and had faced serious criminal charges before.

Newark city councilman Ron. C. Rice on Monday said he was introducing a bill that would require local police to notify federal immigration authorities whenever they arrest someone living the U.S. illegal who is charged with committing a felony.

The bill would be the first piece of legislation resulting from the shooting of four Newark college students, which left three dead and one wounded.

Not that anyone in Philadelphia would know anything about it from reading the Inquirer, although the article's lengthy (2400 word) nature certainly gives the appearance of thoroughness.

I'm so tired of spin, editorialized reporting, and withheld details that my fingers are almost too exhausted to keep writing about this stuff.

While I have no quarrel with reporting that the victims were nice people who had promising lives, does this cancel out any obligation to report the heinous nature of the crimes, the depraved nature of the perpetrator, and the egregiousness of his release?

I hesitate to blame the Inquirer, because it's an AP story and not written by Inquirer staffers, but I'm wondering if crime reporting is being seen more and more as an opportunity to make the facts fit the narrative that fits the bias of the writers.

Call it what you will, but I don't see how they can call it reporting.

Remarkably, it took six AP writers (Erin McClam, David Porter, Jeffrey Gold, Janet Frankston Lorin, Daniela Flores, and Randall Chase) to come up with this story.

It must be hard work when there are so many details that have to be omitted.

UPDATE: Please bear in mind that I subscribe to the Philadelphia Inquirer, and this post is based on the long article which appears on today's front page. Commenter Bradley Filkes points out that the Inquirer web site also links another AP story posted today which includes details about Carranza's illegal status and his being freed on bail. While I'm glad it's posted at the web site, that story is not in today's Inquirer.

MORE: Checking the Inquirer hard copy since Carranza's arrest Thursday, I found one report mentioning his illegal status and the pending charges, which appeared on page B-2 (minus the picture) in Saturday's Local News:

The latest arrest was announced several hours after another person charged in the crime, Jose Carranza, 28, pleaded not guilty to the charges against him, which, besides first-degree murder, include the attempted murder of a fourth student and robbery. It was his first court appearance since he surrendered Thursday to Mayor Cory A. Booker.

His plea came as prosecutors tried to explain why the illegal immigrant from Peru was granted bail earlier this year when charged with assault and child rape.

[...]

Dow would not answer questions about how Carranza was released on bail on previous charges this year, despite his immigration status.

But a cousin of one victim questioned why that happened.

"I believe in a higher power, but I can't help but think that had [authorities] done their job in the beginning, this might not have happened," said Latasia Harvey, 22.

Carranza was indicted by grand juries in New Jersey twice this year - in April on aggravated assault and weapons charges, and in July on 31 counts that included aggravated sexual assault of a child under 13 and endangering the welfare of a child he had a duty to supervise.

He was released on $50,000 bail on the assault case, which stemmed from a barroom fight, and $150,000 bail on the sexual-assault indictment, which charged that the abuse began in 2003 when the girl was 4 and continued to this year.

In the Oct. 1, 2006, brawl at a bar in West Orange, he faces four counts of aggravated assault and weapons charges.

In an interview on CNN, Dow said the "uproar" over Carranza's immigration status was "going to have to wait for another day."

"We realize that's an issue out here in our criminal justice system, and we are addressing it," Dow added.

"Our focus hasn't been his immigration status," McTigue said.

Only today did the story make the front page, and unless you had read the local news in detail on Saturday, you'd never know these most important details -- which provide the basis of huge headlines elsewhere. (And there's been nothing in the Inquirer hard copy about the rape of his latest victims.)

I think it's odd this was buried in local news, because Newark is next to New York, and events there are not considered local news here. But why would they report the most important details in Saturday's local news, then omit them from today's front page story? (It's not as if they didn't know.)

I think it's quite obvious that between Saturday and today it was decided -- somewhere -- to put a very different spin on what would appear in the front page, supposedly "full" version. Most Philadelphians who are not Internet savvy and don't read New York or Newark newspapers would be unaware of the most important details of the story.

It's worth pointing out that to some, Carranza's illegal status is only a "secondary issue":

What I don't understand is why the commentary is not raising questions about violence, about access to guns, and about how brutal indifference to human life has become a part of our culture.


A recently published letter signed by experts in criminal justice - from sociologists to law enforcement professionals - strongly states the findings of many studies that immigrants, regardless of their legal status, are no more likely to break the law than U.S.-born individuals.

If they're illegal, they're no more likely to break the law?

UPDATE: Thank you, Glenn Reynolds, for the link!

UPDATE (08/14/07): In a writeup similar in tone to the one in the Inquirer, the New York Times mentions Carranza's pending charges, but says nothing about his illegal status:

The police say the primary suspects are Jose Lachira Carranza, 28, who was out on $150,000 bail despite pending indictments on a charge of raping a 5-year-old, and one of aggravated assault in a bar fight; and Rodolfo Godinez, 24, convicted of theft in 2003. (Mr. Carranza pleaded not guilty on Friday; Mr. Godinez is at large.)
Is there an emerging rule that the illegal status of criminals ought to be considered irrelevant and should not be mentioned in new reports?

MORE: the Times reported Carranza's illegal status earlier, then left it out of later reports.

I don't understand the argument that this is irrelevant (or "secondary"). If placing an immigration hold on this dangerous psychopath would have saved these victims' lives, his illegal status becomes a central issue in the case.

Here's an interesting tidbit from the earlier Times report:

Local authorities are not required to report the immigration status of people they arrest. Some municipalities, like Suffolk County on Long Island, have made aggressive efforts to do so as part of a crackdown on illegal immigrants, while others consider themselves "sanctuary cities" and avoid such questions, in part because of concerns that it could have a chilling effect on immigrants' relationship with the police.
The "sanctuary city" phenomenon might not be the sort of thing that politicians want the public to know about right now.

UPDATE (08/14/07): Much to its credit, the Inquirer has a fine article by Tom Hester, Jr. -- (titled "Newark Killings Enter Immigration Debate") at its web site which stresses the importance of this case to the national immigration debate.

Considering the criticism of some of the commenters below (and the fact that the Hester piece is dated August 13, 2007, the same day as the front page piece), I thought I would go through both yesterday's and today's editions of the Inquirer.

It simply is not there.

Had I found it anywhere in the paper -- even in buried form -- I would now note that fact, as I did with Saturday's piece. Although my disagreement involved yesterday's front page article, I should have been more meticulous and gone through the hard copy, and reread and noted Saturday's Local News story, which is my fault.

But should I apologize for "missing" the many linked AP reports which never appear in the paper? My complaint was with what I saw yesterday, and what I don't think should have been omitted.

I think the Inquirer is at fault for not printing the stories which appear at its web site. This can create confusion, as it did with the commenter who said that I missed "over a dozen" stories.

What I said above -- "Not that anyone in Philadelphia would know anything about it from reading the Inquirer" -- applies in spades -- and not just to the IHT story, but to the story by Tom Hester, Jr.

There's plenty of stuff at the Inquirer's web site (there always is; they do a fine job), and once again, I did not mean convey the impression that there wasn't.

posted by Eric on 08.13.07 at 01:13 PM





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Great post, Eric. I see this kind of "reporting" more and more, and there was a related post at the Brussel's Journal about this here: http://www.brusselsjournal.com/node/2308


Excerpt:

In democratic societies the press, the Fourth Estate, should supposedly make sure that the government does its job properly as well as raise issues of public interest. In practice, we now seem to have a situation where the political elites cooperate with the media on making sure that some topics receive insufficient or unbalanced attention while others are simply kept off the agenda altogether. This isn't the case with all issues but with some more than others, especially those related to Multiculturalism, mass immigration and anti-discrimination where there seems to be a near-consensus among the elites.

End excerpt.

Harkonnendog   ·  August 13, 2007 07:51 PM

"It must be hard work when there are so many details that have to be omitted."
This struck me as quite a perceptive comment. I read 1984 a long, long time ago but I think there was a similar statement about how tricky it could be to make an event disappear. Do you replace a paragraph in an article? Or replace the whole article with something completely off-topic? And so on. There are probably 6 AP reporters who are chanting "we are at war with EastAsia, we have ALWAYS been at war with EastAsia" as we speaking....

Jim,MtnViewCA,USA   ·  August 13, 2007 07:56 PM

"Remarkably, it took six AP writers (Erin McClam, David Porter, Jeffrey Gold, Janet Frankston Lorin, Daniela Flores, and Randall Chase) to come up with this story."

That is not reportage, that's a committee. Which kind of explains the end result.

Can we exhume ernie pyle and put him on the city beat??

Johnmc   ·  August 13, 2007 08:03 PM

Not as striking an issue, but Will Bunch, the Philadelphia Daily News blogger at Attytood, wrote:

The news was released in the pitched blackness of 4 a.m., on the pages of what will soon be Rupert Murdoch's newest propaganda toy.

Which is all well and good, except that, as reported in the Philadelphia Daily News, the Perseid Meteor showers were lighting up the skies over North America that particular hour of the morning.

At the PDN, narrative takes precedence over cosmic events.

BumperStickerist   ·  August 13, 2007 08:27 PM

I don't read the Inquirer, but if this is their first story on the killings, the fault is theirs - not the AP's. Note that the AP is responsible for the IHT story. The fact that there are six AP writers on the story probably means there have been lots of other articles that you (and I, down in VA) have missed. Has the Inquirer been following the story?

Bob R   ·  August 13, 2007 08:51 PM

Eric, don't forget about the layers and layers of fact-checking editors the Inquirer and AP have.

(I don't follow my own advice. I forget about the AP all the time.)

Aside from the reporting there should also be outrage due to the release on bail of the illegal immigrant following a charge of child rape. It must not be that much of an problem in Newark courts.

The perp was probably feeling pretty confident about getting away with almost anything at the point he was part of killing three and leaving another for dead.

That looks like a classic ladder of criminal growth. (And that's all we know about so far.)

TombZ   ·  August 13, 2007 09:00 PM

Wow. Looks like you fell into an internet trap. Go to the Inquirer and do a search on "Newark Killings." They have been running multiple articles on the story every day for over a week. Not many details left out.

Bob R   ·  August 13, 2007 09:03 PM

The elites are very confused...

They don't dare mention the illegal alien's immigration status because they think that doing so will play into the hands of the evil, racist, "anti-immigrant" Republican George W. Bush.

Yes, the same GWB who tried so desperately to ram the amnesty bill down our throats.

When the Mexican illegals marched here in L.A. a couple of years ago, they condemned Bush for being "anti-immigration."

The press picked it up, and its been playing this card ever since.

These are people who are simply unable to think.

Tom W.   ·  August 13, 2007 09:03 PM
Bradley J. Fikes   ·  August 13, 2007 09:09 PM

I believe this is an example of work that American's won't do. We'll now have to put out an appeal for immigrant reporters to get the job done.

Menlo Bob   ·  August 13, 2007 09:39 PM

"don't forget about the layers and layers of fact-checking editors"

Would those be sedimentary layers? Or something obscene?

pst314   ·  August 13, 2007 09:46 PM

It's interesting to read all of your horseshit about "the bias of the writers" and "making the facts fit the narrative," followed up by you admitting that another story -- and a quite lengthy one at that -- gave considerable detail about this thug's illegal status and criminal past.

Guess the writers decided to blow their own narrative out of the water!

Classical values, indeed. If these are "classical values," give me paganism.

Dexter Westbrook   ·  August 13, 2007 10:11 PM

Dexter (More like Sinister, I'd think), perhaps you should return to school for some reading comprehension work. Either that or accept a medal for obtuse point missing (assuming that you *did* comprehend the entry). The point is that a/the major local paper (which I presume would be, on average, the likely place for local residents who might be outraged to look for information) deliberately left out some major facts that might indeed have outraged them. They would have had to go to another source to find this out.

Of course, alternatively we could conclude that *6* reporters were unable to get these facts I suppose. Having observed a couple of J-schools and a few journalism college programs that isn't too hard to buy.

JorgXMcKie   ·  August 13, 2007 10:31 PM

Jorg whoever,

You're proof that this blog is overrun by morons.

I'll try to explain this in short sentences, so you might be able to understand them.

Mr. Classical Values went to great lengths to say that six AP writers left out details in their story about the Newark shootings to serve their agenda/narrative/whatever.

Then, after spending God knows how many words thumping his shrunken chest, he admits two of the same AP writers did another story that included the details about the perpetrator, outlined at some length, that he had said just a few sentences earlier had been omitted to serve the writers' agenda/narrative/whatever.

I won't suggest reading lessons for you, because I doubt they'd do any good. I do hope you get a job in your life that pays more than the minimum wage.

Dexter Westbrook   ·  August 13, 2007 11:36 PM

It's no different than what goes on with Muslims in the West. Almos always, when a muslim commits a crime, even if it is directly related to their religious beliefs, either their religious affiliation is not mentioned, or the details are left so vague as to be uninterpretable. And this is not a new phenomenon. In 1989, in Canada, when Marc Lepine murdered 14 women in Montreal, no mention was made of the fact that he was raised by a female-hating Algerian muslim father, even though obviously it was the key to understanding why he felt the need to kill women. Even now, I would bet that 99% of Canadians do not know that the Montreal Polytechnique massacre was basically an Islamic act of vengeance against females.

Lori   ·  August 13, 2007 11:48 PM

Growing up my parents subscribed to the Inquirer, the New York Times, the Wall Street Journal and sometimes the Morning Call or Pocono Record. I got used to reading between the lines in all of them. Frankly it was rare they even covered the same things - esp the local papers because they only get bought for better coverage of local stuff.


For what it's worth the Inquirer was only read for obituaries and wedding announcements. Otherwise it was considered useless.

Jack Diederich   ·  August 14, 2007 01:13 AM

Sorry. I'm usually in agreement with Mr. CV, but he has made the mistake here that he usually (properly) spends time taking the MSM to task for. He read an article and missed that it was one of over a dozen articles that had been in the Inquirer over the course of nine days. There may be other things to criticize, but leaving details out of one article in twenty is not a valid one. (Just a hint for future reference - when a MSM piece has six authors there usually have been lots of stories on the subject before. Lots of authors is a sign of a review piece.)

Bob R   ·  August 14, 2007 07:45 AM

Concision is not a classical value?

Anyhow, AP offers a wide variety of pieces for it's members, so a paper can push any agenda desired by selecting /which/ one to print. The person who picked the windbag "human interest" piece in the Inquirer wanted to draw uncritical eyes to the advertising in that paper.

Phillep   ·  August 14, 2007 09:04 AM

"What I don't understand is why the commentary is not raising questions about violence, about access to guns, and about how brutal indifference to human life has become a part of our culture."

Perhaps the commenter missed the fact that the baby-raping executioner was NOT of this culture, but, PERUVIAN. That's a prime example of distorting the facts of an event to suit a political purpose.

Thomas Hazlewood   ·  August 14, 2007 09:21 AM

Stats are NOT kept for American deaths from illegal aliens but gives pause that estimates show the numbers to be equivalent to military deaths in Iraq. Just think if the NBC news or the NYT had a daily banner giving the number of deaths.
They're attempting to be gatekeepers and frankly it is clear that being anti-American is the agenda they serve.

Jim,MtnViewCA,USA   ·  August 14, 2007 11:05 AM
AntiCitizenOne   ·  August 14, 2007 12:02 PM

"over a dozen articles that had been in the Inquirer over the course of nine days"?

This post was about yesterday's front page article, which I considered to have omitted the most important facts about Carranza -- facts which are creating a large national uproar, and which definitely should have been mentioned.

By "in the Inquirer" do you mean at their web site or in the paper? The former aggregates numerous AP stories that are not in the actual paper. As I said, looking through the hard copy, I found only three which even mentioned Carranza, and only one -- the one buried in Saturday's Local News -- stated that he was an illegal alien.

It's one of the most important details of the story, and I don't think most Inquirer readers would have seen it.

If the front page story was in fact intended as a "review piece" then it's even worse.

This story is about a pychopathic illegal alien and the fact that he was scandalously freed to go on a deranged crime spree, which he did.

My complaint is with a clear attempt to spin it as something else.

Eric Scheie   ·  August 14, 2007 01:16 PM

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